Feedback from the screening

After the screening of our first draft of the title sequence to our class we received lots of positive feedback but also 3 main points on which we can improve on, the main things in which they like about it was the split screens and also the colours within the split screens, they said it worked well with the genre that we are using and helped to create an atmosphere, they also said the music helped to do this as well because it is happy and uplifting which a rom-com normally is.

The first main improvement which was suggested was the colour of the males clip, they said that we could make them all in black and white so that it contrasts to the woman's colourful scenes also it shows his life is dull compared to hers.

The second improvement which was suggested is the speeding up of some of the clips as some of them go on for a little to long.

The last improvement that was suggested is to change the ending as it does not work compared to the rest of the title sequence, we can change this by using lots of the clips from me crossing the road making it quicker and cleaner than before.

We started editing theses straight away and we was able to change the ending so that it looked better: